Week 9 - Written Communication

100 Word Idea Statement

 (Min 100 words, max 120 words) The statement will introduce the title of your project, the intent of your communication approach and then explain how you accomplished your objectives using an example of one of your projects. Use the “Expository Writing” format, as below:  

1. Title:

2. Topic sentence (outlining the subject you will be examining https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Topic_sentence).

3. Thesis (or statement you are trying to prove).

4. Argument (supported by 1 or more pieces of evidence or facts).

5. Conclusion (proving or disproving your thesis, it doesn’t matter which, be honest)

BEDROOM EXPANSION (SPACE) AND VENTILATION

By redesigning a simple bedroom space, it can provide both a healthy environment and experience for users. Alterations such as expanding, reshaping and implementing additional ventilation, can influence how a space is utilised and significantly improve the wellbeing of individuals. Research shown in the ‘Journal of Happiness Studies’, discusses the importance of space as factors such as decluttering, the ability to move around, designated areas for study/relaxation, and having sufficient air and lighting, are major contributors to good mental health. However, this can only be achieved by having ample space to live in, therefore by expanding a space and enforcing more ventilation, it can drastically enhance the overall wellbeing of individuals.